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©2005-2009 ~ryter408
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This is the second iteration of many for a poster projrct im doing in my Typography class. I have to make a poster about a typographer and a specific type the created. I got Barry Deck and the typeface Template Gothic. My intention of the poster is to show the deliberate imperfection that Barry Deck incorporated in Template Gothic. For all U design cats, let me know what im doin wrong and if im obtaining what im strivin for. I will be sumbit many different versions as I refine my design of the poster, critiques are welcomed and needed.

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i like the 'T' angle and circle add but what if you'd put the 'emplate' in the same angle as the 'T' just right below?

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ya my teacher and classmates said they had a hard time reading template gothic, and i can see why. i think ur right if i ngled'emplate" with the T it would be more readable.
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ya my teacher and classmates said they had a hard time reading template gothic, and i can see why. i think ur right if i ngled'emplate" with the T it would be more readable.
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this one works, and looks best, in my opnion!!
the one thing i would do to sit the copy in the box better is align text to the left instead of centered. and then again with the alignment of the T. i love the gradient in this piece.

anywho jus my $00.02

i wasn't to amped on typography class, but we made font style sheets as well. i used goudy old style and eras. one had to be serif and the other had to be sans serif. now they are in my portfolio :)

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ya i liked the gradient myself, i used it caz the creator barry deck did that alot, but my teacher gave me crap about it caz im trying to show how Template Gothic was made intentionally imperfect and gradient exude perfection more than imperfection. but u right bout the centered text it is ugly centered.

Thanks for the ides, is a big help
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it really all boils down to opnion and the teacher is giving out the opnion & grade, so thats an important opnion to worry about. :D

i like looking at other peoples work and letting others look at mine. it helps lead to improvement.:)

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i totally agree wit that!

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