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©2005-2009 ~ryter408
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This is the third iteration of many for a poster projrct im doing in my Typography class. I have to make a poster about a typographer and a specific type the created. I got Barry Deck and the typeface Template Gothic. My intention of the poster is to show the deliberate imperfection that Barry Deck incorporated in Template Gothic. For all U design cats, let me know what im doin wrong and if im obtaining what im strivin for. I will be sumbit many different versions as I refine my design of the poster, critiques are welcomed and needed.

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:iconreplicant:
Cool design.

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I opt 4 peace of mind:meditation::relaxed::meditate: to "world peace":flagcanada::flageu::flaguk::flagus::earth::finger:
:iconloaded:
i think this fits the concept best

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:iconryter408:
ya, i got the same response in my class crtique.
:iconloaded:
! :giggle:

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:icontangledweb:
Okay, a few things...I love the man with the horns in the first iteration. I'm assuming you eliminated it because it's a typography project, and you need to keep it to basic text and lines. The interplay with the T and G works here...definitely odd. You've worked so much with 90 degree angles...maybe the interplay with T and G aren't necessarily 90 degrees? Just something to think about. Love the content of the text (i.e. fucked up text).
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ryan its mark from type!

Hooray for Science! lol jk.

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#someday this distance will be something we can embrace#
:iconryter408:
hey mark, ya i never saw the flask thing till u said it, i guess its the whole subconscious thing.......I must want to be a scientist subconsciously :-P
:iconryter408:
wow you read my and everyone in my classes mind! ya i got rid of the illustrations of the first one caz i felt i took the emphasis away from the typeface itself. I also scrapped the angled T and G. im at the point now where im keeping the idea of the 3rd poster and gonna revise antweak to make much more effective. I'll be posting more so keep commenting please..you helped in me seein alot, thanks much tangle!

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